Our Beautiful Disaster [Severus/Evan - PG-13]

Sep 04, 2010 00:30

Author: alley_skywalker
Title: Our Beautiful Disaster
Prompt: #29 Submitted by: luciusmistress
Pairing: Severus Snape/Evan Rosier
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Character death, Slash
Word Count: 7,163
Summary: Severus can’t let Evan go without saying goodbye.
Notes: Present time is intersected with flashbacks. The flashbacks’ formatting is the same as the formatting of the present ( Read more... )

!round3, rating: pg-13, pairing: severus/evan, !prompt fest, slash, fic

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secretsolitaire September 4 2010, 00:32:36 UTC
Very sad. Enjoyed this!

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alley_skywalker November 5 2010, 08:48:02 UTC
Thank you for your review!

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astarloa September 4 2010, 13:37:04 UTC
I’m a massive fan of the structure of this story, the way it switches between past and present. It really captures the sense of poignancy and loss underlying the characters’ relationship. And the ending? The ending is beautifully, perfectly heartbreaking.

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alley_skywalker November 5 2010, 08:49:01 UTC
I'm very glad you liked it! Thank you for commenting (and sorry for the super late response *sheepish*)

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lyntek November 10 2010, 05:06:30 UTC
Oh, man. Should have braced myself better for the tearjerker -- anything with Evan in it is bound not to end well. ;O;

Lovely writing and beautiful characterization. Thanks for writing this!

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alley_skywalker November 22 2010, 10:26:01 UTC
Thank you for reviewing!
And yea, Evan lends himself marvelously to lots of angst.

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