When It Rains; Gift for wwmrsweasleydo!

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Recipient: wwmrsweasleydo
Title: When It Rains
Author: writerofictions
Beta: phiso-kun
Pairing/s: Sirius/Remus
Rating: PG
Warning(s): Beware of angst, snogging, and general emoness.
Word Count: 2,334
Summary: Remus recalls the last night he spent with Sirius, and wishes he could change the course of action.
Disclaimer: This is a work of fan fiction set in the Harry Potter universe -

Comments

[phys_nut]

aww,that was heartbreaking! sirius/remus never fails to make me teary-eyed, and you got their interactions and the emotions between them down pat. wonderful job!

[wwmrsweasleydo]

Aw! That's beautiful and beautifully angsty. Thank you so much. Theirs really is one of the saddest love stories in literature.

Thanks, I love it. I love the rain and the kiss and the brutal sexuality. Sirius was very sexy, the silly boy.

It felt far sexier than the actual PG action. You managed to get an intensity and energy into it. Also, there's a restricting feeling of claustrophobia about the way you describe what is inside and what is outside the house. It makes the argument and Sirius' reactions even more understandable.

re: When It Rains

[vaysh]

I love the way you set up this scene, how differently the house, the rain, the thunder was for those two men, despite the bond between them. As your Remus said, for Sirius Grimmauld Place was a prison, while Remus saw it as a sanctuary for the one he loved. I do think the soft velvet rain was Remus' love for Sirius. And it is so sad that Sirius could not see the safety Remus was offering. Very, very sexy, your irritating, manipulative, volatile Sirius. ♥

[k8matty]

Aw, this is so sad *cuddles Remus* but it was also beautiful and angsty and thats what counts ^_^
Loved it.

[aquila_star]

This was lovely and angsty, and I think you portrayed Sirius' mood, the rising madness and frustration really well. Also, the last line is very poetic. Well done. :D