FIC: A Line-Storm Fear [Hermione/Theodore Nott]

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Title: A Line-Storm Fear
Author/Artist: idreamofdraco
Prompt: # 10 by articcat621
Pairing(s): Theodore Nott/Hermione Granger
Word Count: 4,385 words
Rating: PG
Warning(s): Mentions of past child abuse.
Disclaimer: Harry Potter characters are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No profit is being made, and no copyright infringement is intended.
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Comments

[gelsey]

I love this pairing, and I love your awkward Theo. Well done.

[idreamofdraco]

Thank you so much!!

[khalulu]

Oh, I love this. I love awkward, thoughtful Theo and his perceptions.

[idreamofdraco]

Thank you!! I love awkward Theo as well. ;o;

[sunshine_sundae]

Lovely. This pairing is definitely growing on me through this fest! I am very fond of Draco also, so I loved that you used him here too. I'd have been very surprised at what the pair of them did if I were Hermione! I also liked that you didn't go down the cliche comfort in person route, with Theo providing physical comfort. It was very like him - and very kind - of him to create a private space for Hermione and not pressure her into using it or demand gratitude.

You wrote Theo very well - his frankness, his awkwardness. I particularly enjoyed the story opening about the different places he, Draco and Pansy liked to go. It suited Theo's voice very well. Thanks for a lovely read!

[idreamofdraco]

Thank you!! I've never written for this pairing before, but I always enjoy writing Theodore. I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

Beautiful writing

[sarablade]

I don't think I've ever thought of him at all.
It was beautiful writing, true characters drawn with depth and sensibility, and my throat caught quite a few times. Thanks for sharing.... And if you ever write a sequel please let us know

RE: Beautiful writing

[idreamofdraco]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story! n_n

[maccadole]

I really liked this. I've been sitting on it for a few days trying to figure out what it is I like so much, but I honestly haven't been able to get my thoughts together because life has been so busy. I'm thinking I might come back to it and leave more of a review later, but for now I'll simply say that I liked it a lot. :D

[idreamofdraco]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for reading!