"Sweet Surrender" (Pansy/Daphne)

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Title: Sweet Surrender
Author: arjd
Prompt: F4 Clothes getting soaked in the rain
Prompt submitted by: gamma_x_orionis
Pairing(s): Pansy/Daphne
Word Count: ~1000
Rating: R
Warning(s): mention of past underage, minor D/s
Disclaimer:Harry Potter characters are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No profit is being made, and no copyright infringement

Comments

[nearlyconscious]

I AM SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW, THIS MADE MY DAY.

So many things I love about this. The fact that Daphne's flat is a mess (the image of Pansy shuffling everything on the bed down to the floor is such a nice one!), Pansy's description/characterisation, how you subtly allude to their past friendship and exploration of their sexualities, and the doubt in Daphne's mind about Pansy's intentions... Thank you for making my OTP so alive, mystery author, I love you.
*dances around happily*

[arjd]

You have NO idea how happy this comment made me! Eeee! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and it even made you dance!

[nearlyconscious]

Oh it made me squee to no end. :D :D

[digthewriter]

Love it!!! ♥

[arjd]

Thanks, bb!

[josephinestone]

"Not bad, Daph. Did you make an effort just for me?"

I'm sure she did. ;)

Even though she is getting what she wants, it still feel sad.

[arjd]

She totally did ;)

Yeah, it is a bit sad because Pansy will never feel the same way Daphne does. Poor Daph.

[lokifan]

Very hot! I love that Daphne's flat is a mess, haha, and Pansy demanding to see what she's got on now!

[arjd]

Thanks so much!

[xonceinadream]

So lovely. I love the little details you added like her pushing everything off the bed and their past. And the use of the rain was so great with the lovely imagery. Loved it.

[arjd]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Rain can be such a fantastic scene-setter, but also a very good reason to take off wet clothes, haha!