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FIC: "No Charity" for donnaimmaculata

Apr 25, 2014 15:37

Recipient: donnaimmaculata
Author: ???
Title: No Charity
Rating: PG
Pairing: Aunt Marge/Rita Skeeter
Word Count: 3200
Warnings/Content: None
Summary: Rita sets out on a tough assignment - to interview Miss Marjorie Dursley.
Notes: This pairing took me by surprise, donnaimmaculata, I hope it works for you. I made up the currency conversion, because that's what ( Read more... )

rita skeeter, beholder 2014, fic, marge dursley/rita skeeter, rated:pg, marge dursley, femslash

Comments 1

capitu May 5 2014, 21:13:55 UTC

That was fantastic, simply fantastic. I loved how you wrote Rita, she was so cynical, but you gave her a whole new dimension to her characterisation.

Rita didn't know where Alfred - “My name's Jerry, Miss,” he kept saying, as if she cared.

and then,

She looked like herself, before she'd decided to become Rita Skeeter

See what I mean?

I loved her interactions with aunt Marge, and how at the end she saw her as a person, not just a means to a goal, you know? Amazing work. Thank you.