Gift for BlackMoonRuby!

[stephanometra]

Title: Tour de Force
Author: maidenform
Recipient: blackmoonruby
Pairing: Sirius/Regulus.
Rating: R
Summary: Sirius had always wanted to be an artist.
A/N: Special thanks go to my wonderful beta, to stephanometra for running this exchange and being patient with me, and to blackmoonruby for the prompt. I hope you like this!

Comments

[snegurochka_lee]

Ohhhhh, what a great story! I love your narrative structure here, and the dynamics between the brothers is so lyrical and understated. You have a wonderful way with words, too. Like -

He found himself noticing the minutest features of Regulus' body, such as the ends of his hair curled ever so slightly upward or the way he held his hands as he walked, or even the delicately twisted shape of his ears.

or -

Everything depended on all the minutiae falling into place like bricks and mortar

And the end! Fabulous. ♥

[summerborn]

Ooh. *shiver* That was ... well, rather creepy in a way, but good, very good.