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stephanometra in hp_backtosmut

Gift for Severity_Softly!

Oct 04, 2006 19:25

Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night
Author: celandineb
Recipient: severity_softly
Pairing(s): Lupin/Snape
Rating: NC17
Summary: Lupin forces Snape to overcome a certain fear.
Warnings: As requested, this is kinky -- rimming, bondage, spanking, and pissplay. You have been warned.
Author's Note: It's pretty much PWP, and I hope that there is sufficient kink for you, dear ( Read more... )

slash, severus, remus, remus/severus

Comments 10

severity_softly October 5 2006, 00:51:10 UTC

asdfghjkl!! I think my brain may have just melted.

Snape tasted of whisky and herbs.

I really loved this detail. It made me wish I was the one kissing him! Mmm.

This is deffinately kinky enough! I can't remember now the exact kinks I mentioned, but you hit most of my favorites! I really love this! Thank you thank you!

celandineb November 7 2006, 01:35:38 UTC

Very belatedly (I was going to finally answer these Saturday and then LJ melted down *rolls eyes*) -- I'm so glad you liked it! I enjoyed writing this piece quite a lot, figuring out ways to get in as many kinks as possible. *g*

summerborn October 5 2006, 01:33:16 UTC

Zummm.... definitely kinky. :D I like the idea that Snape's had a long time to have all of these fantasies and now gets to act on some of them. Well done!

celandineb November 7 2006, 01:36:24 UTC

Belatedly -- thank you so much! The kink was a lot of fun to write.

maddiec24 October 5 2006, 02:07:20 UTC

I would love to give you some coherent feedback, but... guh. That was way hot. Do we get to see them explore some more?

celandineb November 7 2006, 01:37:19 UTC

A very belated thank-you! Glad you liked it. *g* I don't have any present plans to write a follow-up, though, having way too many other fests on my plate just now.

secretsolitaire October 5 2006, 12:29:12 UTC

Nngh. Spanking and rimming are my two favorite kinks, and this really hit the spot.

celandineb November 7 2006, 01:38:15 UTC

*g* Belatedly -- so very glad you enjoyed reading this kinkiness as much as I enjoyed writing it.

elmathelas October 5 2006, 19:44:33 UTC

Very very hot, even if I do doubt the tongue's ability to penetrate as far as the prostate-- yet then again I've never tried, so I'll suspend my disbelief, which is easy with a story as hot as this.

nicely done.

celandineb November 7 2006, 01:40:00 UTC

Belatedly, many thanks! Glad you thought it was hot.

And you're quite right that it's actually not possible for the human tongue to reach the prostate; I was totally not paying attention when I put that in. So I fixed it when I reposted on my own LJ.