Gift for Lazaray!

Oct 27, 2006 00:11

Title: Just Because
Author: summerborn
Recipient: lazaray
Pairing: Bellatrix/Regulus
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Regulus receives a visit from Bellatrix - his older, more experienced, and let's not forget Death Eater cousin.
Warnings: Bondage, dubious consent, rough sex.
Author's Note: Thanks to two helpful and speedy betas [emiime and fictionalaspect]; thanks to stephanometra for herding cats in a ( Read more... )

bellatrix, blackcest, het, regulus, bellatrix/regulus

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summerborn October 28 2006, 14:04:34 UTC
Aw, you're too sweet :)

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lazaray October 28 2006, 02:50:27 UTC
........wow. i'm totally speechless. thank you so much!

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summerborn October 28 2006, 14:05:17 UTC
You're welcome :)

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etrangere October 28 2006, 15:07:32 UTC
ngggggg !!!!

That was very, very, very hot.

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summerborn October 28 2006, 16:20:10 UTC
Thank you very much!

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summerborn October 28 2006, 18:17:09 UTC
Ha, yes! Someone is creeped out! My job is done. Thank you so much!

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fleshdress October 28 2006, 17:37:27 UTC
I liked this, especially the last line. It was nicely descriptive and the rough sex worked well. Is the formatting a bit hinky just here: "I&mdash" He did take a step back then, and Bellatrix pressed him forward, one hand on his chest, the other gripping her wand.? And I'm not sure if there would be bleachers at Hogwarts, but that's a very small britpick.

Overall, I really liked this. :)

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summerborn October 28 2006, 18:19:33 UTC
Thanks very much! I was never sure if they were referred to as "bleachers" - would "stands" be better?

And the formatting, yes, unfortunately I can't edit. But thank you for your comments!

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fleshdress October 28 2006, 18:48:47 UTC
I'd go for 'stands' or 'stalls'. :)

And you can't, can you? Sorry, I didn't think to check that. How frustrating for you.

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summerborn October 28 2006, 19:04:24 UTC
Thank you!

Well, it was my fault in the first place for trying to use mdashes - it looks okay on some systems but not all. Ah, well.

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