Gift for Emiime!

Oct 11, 2006 05:54

Title: But What is One More Aberration?
Author: fictionalaspect
Recipient: emiime
Pairing(s): Percy/Ron
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Percy confuses almost everyone, and Ron has always thought that perhaps his proximity and their shared blood only makes Percy more confusing, not less.
Warnings: A bit of angst. Incest (obviously). Minor character death.
Author's Note: First ( Read more... )

slash, percy/ron, percy, ron

Leave a comment

Comments 55

aylaranzz October 12 2006, 00:42:06 UTC
This was fantastic! The plot, the characterization, the angst and sex. Everything was perfect.

Reply

almostblue October 23 2006, 01:11:52 UTC
Thank you! I feel I might have gone a bit overboard on the angst, but eh, the muse demanded it. So glad you enjoyed reading! ♥

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

almostblue October 23 2006, 01:14:02 UTC
Wheee!

Thank you so much! Man, it's always so hard when my friends comment on one of my fics in an anonymous exchange and I just want to be like "*glomp* thank you!" and then I have to wait all this time for the reveals :)

I'm glad you enjoyed that line--it took me a couple tries to get it smooth and readable enough to mirror what was going on in my head. Nice to see it being appreciated ♥

Reply


celandineb October 12 2006, 03:16:43 UTC
Splendid... Percy would make the condition to himself that it will only be once, and there's no doubt in my mind that he will keep it. *sniffles*

Reply

almostblue October 23 2006, 01:20:11 UTC
Oh, definitely. *grins* I really struggled with that for a bit, trying to figure out a way to work in the smex that emiime requested with this sort of odd, angsty narrative that I was writing in. I finally decided to just let Percy work it out for himself, and that was what he came up with!

Thank you so much! *hugs*

Reply


nqdonne October 12 2006, 04:01:40 UTC
Wow, that was just fabulous. Definitely reccing this. :D

Reply

almostblue October 23 2006, 01:21:53 UTC
Thank you so much! I read the rec you posted (me? stalker? nah. *grins*) and I'm so very flattered. Glad you enjoyed, and thank you for spreading the Percy/Ron goodness! Emi and I are convinced the fandom needs more of this pairing :)

Reply


secretsolitaire October 12 2006, 04:02:37 UTC
Wow. This is an amazing story. I think what makes it work is that you take the time to get inside Percy's head, to make me not only understand but also care about him.

Percy has always silently felt he might find his childhood down there, buried under a broken typewriter and a mound of moldy paperwork
You say so much here with so few words...very evocative image.

Percy's eyes will be as dry and bright-blue as ever behind his glasses, because they were the ones who taught how him how to be strong and how not to cry.
Ohhh. My heart.

The sex at the end is almost unbearably intimate...hot but desperately sad at the same time. Percy's motivation here is true to canon -- his need to please, to be good enough, to be forgiven. My heart breaks for him.

Beautiful fic. Thanks for this. *adds to mems*

Reply

almostblue October 23 2006, 01:25:06 UTC
Thank you so much! I love it when you review--you always take time to give helpful comments and feedback, and really, it's so appreciated.

Percy's eyes will be as dry and bright-blue as ever behind his glasses, because they were the ones who taught how him how to be strong and how not to cry.

Confession: I teared up writing that line. And I *never* tear up. I really can't claim responsibility for it; it just came out of nowhere, and I just said "Okay muse, whatever you say" and wrote it down :)

And gah, the sex. The sex was so hard to write, for some reason. *frowns at fic* I'm glad it turned out well from your end, though.

Reply

secretsolitaire October 23 2006, 02:38:00 UTC
Thank you so much! I love it when you review--you always take time to give helpful comments and feedback, and really, it's so appreciated.

You're very welcome! I always feel like leaving a decent review is the least I can do when I'm really moved by a fic. ♥

I really can't claim responsibility for it; it just came out of nowhere, and I just said "Okay muse, whatever you say" and wrote it down

I haven't even attempted fic in years, but the best story I ever wrote in high school came to me out of nowhere just like that -- it practically wrote itself. It'd be nice if you could bottle that sort of inspiration, wouldn't it? ;-)

Reply


Leave a comment

Up