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Babies and Bikes

Nov 15, 2003 11:10

Title: Babies and Bikes ( Read more... )

lily potter, sirius black, challenge: what goes up must come down, author: trinityday

Comments 37

katshakespeare November 15 2003, 08:25:09 UTC

Oh man, that was quite amusing, albeit horrid!!

*laughs* Poor Lily. Aw ... poor Sirius!

Very nice job. I enjoyed it. A lot.

trinityday November 15 2003, 08:34:00 UTC

Horrid? Do you mean the ending? I'm glad you enjoyed it, though.

katshakespeare November 15 2003, 08:34:30 UTC

Yeah. That last line. Very clever.

trinityday November 15 2003, 08:40:15 UTC

Thanks. As I said to penknife, it just seems so fitting. Even if it was "horrid".

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amanuensis1 November 15 2003, 08:31:09 UTC

Oh, lordy, I was laughing so delightedly and then you hit us with that. And yet I was still laughing. Terrific.

trinityday November 15 2003, 08:36:55 UTC

Hey, if Sirius is allowed to laugh when he's framed for the murder of thirteen people, I think you're allowed to laugh at Lily's stupid, foreshadow-y comment.

penknife November 15 2003, 08:33:54 UTC

Ouch! It was funny right up until--well, until it was still funny, but in an awful way. I can so see this, too.

trinityday November 15 2003, 08:38:50 UTC

Thanks. I just couldn't resist throwing in that last line. It seemed so Lily-like - well, so maternal in general - and it, well, we all know how that turned out.

minttown1 November 15 2003, 08:51:49 UTC

Wow. I really, really like this. It sort of hit right here, but it was quite wonderful all the same.

trinityday November 18 2003, 09:09:50 UTC

Thank you. Being told that you're able to affect (or is it effect?) someone in 100 words means a lot to me.

anjali_organna November 15 2003, 09:44:19 UTC

*sighs* It's so amusing and heartbreaking at the same time. Great job.

trinityday November 18 2003, 09:10:52 UTC

That's exactly what I was aiming for. I just hope Sirius doesn't remember this conversation afterwards.