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pinkelephant42 in hp100

Haze

Jan 17, 2007 11:41

Title: Haze ( Read more... )

voldemort, author: pinkelephant42, harry potter, challange: dreams

Comments 10

blonde_cecile January 17 2007, 19:44:02 UTC

Oh my. That last line, especially. &hearts &hearts :)

pinkelephant42 January 18 2007, 17:32:48 UTC

Thank you! *Love*

bewarethesmirk January 17 2007, 21:36:13 UTC

Oh, God. You have a way with words, and this is gorgeous.

pinkelephant42 January 18 2007, 21:15:46 UTC

Thank you!!

crystalusagi January 18 2007, 07:45:23 UTC

Ooooooh. I LOVE YOU. That was SO GOOD. o.o

Awesome. ♥

pinkelephant42 January 18 2007, 21:16:34 UTC

*LOVE*
Thanks!
<3

flammablehat January 18 2007, 17:56:07 UTC

wow. i like how i couldn't tell whether it was harry or voldemort the whole way through. i'm still not at all certain who it is. very well done!

pinkelephant42 January 18 2007, 21:17:31 UTC

Wow, I wrote it from Harry, but you're right, it can go both ways. o.O
Glad you like it!

flammablehat January 20 2007, 05:07:56 UTC

that's totally bizarre - because i initially read it as voldemort. i had to think about it to find harry, but when i look at it now i think it could very easily go either way. i think i saw voldemort initially because i read "and corrupt minions" incorrectly as "to corrupt minions," which changes the nature of the sentence entirely.

the duality in this piece is very, very cool. props to you!

ibkicking January 21 2007, 02:03:01 UTC

Wonderful!!

Very well written :)