Screams and Moaning

[tablyn24]

Title: Screams and Moaning
House: Hufflepuff
Characters/Pairings: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley, Ginny Weasley, two others
Challenge: Dreams
Word Count: 100 x 2
Rating: PG-13

Comments

[chokolattejedi]

Hee hee. I love it. Very cute. :)

[wirelesstouch]

These are both really cute! And funny.

However, I would suggest getting a beta reader or just looking them over - perhaps reading the outloud? There are some tense issues in the beginning, and some other small grammer issues. It would make your work a lot better! If you want, I could look over them for you. ^^