Comments | hp100: Failed. Again.

realmess in hp100

Failed. Again.

Jul 30, 2006 21:26

Title: Failed. Again ( Read more... )

tom riddle, challenge: forbidden

Comments 9

wulfkub July 31 2006, 01:59:30 UTC

Nice one!

realmess July 31 2006, 12:10:01 UTC

Thank you :)

ajat July 31 2006, 02:01:14 UTC

Can ye evanesco something that's a real thing ? The snake Snape'd evanesco-d had been a magical spell result ...

Anyways, good story.

:)

realmess July 31 2006, 12:14:52 UTC

I have my doubts but it was one word and I already had to delete like 3 sentences (I run over the word limit), so assuming it is Dumbledore we're talking about I'd say he could do it. I wanted to use Avada but then reconsidered it being a Dark spell, and all. Come to think of it I could have used Stupify but then it would lack the drama of an angry and hurt Tom, (and I have a feeling it would go over 100 words again XD )so...Evanesco it was ;P

Thanks.
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ajat August 4 2006, 13:14:43 UTC

Maybe drabbles should be a little more flexible … say between 90-120 words … instead of a strict 100 … ? That'd make it better to handle, innit ?

gwenlliana July 31 2006, 03:16:59 UTC

Very nice!

realmess July 31 2006, 12:15:51 UTC

Thank you.
^.- *icon text love*
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gwenlliana July 31 2006, 17:59:29 UTC

Thank you... It's one of my favorites.

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realmess July 31 2006, 12:18:42 UTC

Thanks. It's my second drabble and the first to qualify for 100 words after a very vigorous deleting editing
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