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Knew

Jul 02, 2006 18:34

Title: Knew

House: Slytherin

Word count: 100

Challenge Bank

Characters: Molly

Her eldest son would be handsome, for a while.

The next would be drawn to flames and danger.

The third child would be lost in rules, but return.

The two after would be close, chaotic, creative and cruel, and they would leave.

The youngest boy would be drawn to power and ( Read more... )

molly weasley, author: evelynlela, challenge: bank

Comments 6

hiddenshallows July 3 2006, 11:20:03 UTC

hey - i like this, but um, "a while" is two words ;)

evelynlela July 3 2006, 16:58:33 UTC

You’re right I know, but because I'd already cut about forty words I wasn't sure where to take two more from.
Thanks for commenting :)

anonymous July 4 2006, 07:14:21 UTC

oooo...interesting idea! Reminds me of the Red Violin...ever see that movie?

Great stuff! ^_^

evelynlela July 4 2006, 13:16:05 UTC

Thanks for the comment, although I haven't seen the movie.

olli_ander July 5 2006, 04:05:13 UTC

This is a lovely, melancholy piece. The first paragraph reads like a prophecy from the books. Really nice. Well done.

evelynlela July 5 2006, 04:39:45 UTC

Thanks, I was attempting to make it like a fortune teller would say it, however I don't believe in such and thus have no idea, so I balanced it instead.