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Family Portrait / Judas / Control / The Disappointing Father's Club

Jun 28, 2006 10:40

Title: Family Portrait
House: Ravenclaw
Rating: G
Challenge: Born to Be Bad
Word Count: 100.
Characters/Pairings: Barty Crouch, Jr ( Read more... )

rating: g, snape/crouch jr, author: amor_remanet, lord voldemort, tom riddle, rating: pg, snape, severus/barty, challenge: born to be bad, rating: pg-13, severus snape, sirius/remus, barty crouch jr, peter pettigrew

Comments 4

sor_bet June 28 2006, 18:58:15 UTC

Ooh, Snape/Barty Crouch, Jr! I've never even HEARD of that pairing before. I like the idea that even back then, Snape was a pretty good Occclumens (or at least good at hiding his feelings/intentions).

And the last one is wonderfully written, even if (or especially because?) the Snape part is so sad. The line about Tom is perfect.

amor_remanet June 29 2006, 01:49:12 UTC

Yeah... it's a small ship, but it's a good one. I like to think that, even if Snape wasn't a totally brilliant Occlumens then (and he might've been, since he was a double agent and had to fool Voldemort), he's good at keeping his emotions hidden. It's one of the things I play on a lot in my longer stuff with this pairing.

Thank you all around! Secretly, the last one rose out of the line about Tom coming to mind, so... especially glad you like that!

evelynlela June 30 2006, 00:50:59 UTC

Awesome last lines on all three but especially the last.

amor_remanet June 30 2006, 01:01:18 UTC

Thank you! :D