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mochi_tsuki in hp100

May 11, 2006 10:46

Title: The Perils of Plants ( Read more... )

Comments 3

unlikely2 May 11 2006, 18:32:09 UTC

Oh, clever.

A sort of mental itch until the reader deals with it. Well told.

mochi_tsuki May 12 2006, 01:07:31 UTC

Thank you. I wasn't sure if listing the character made the point too obvious from the start, so I'm glad you felt a 'mental itch'.

cheyinka May 13 2006, 08:57:41 UTC

I loved your description, and was actually surprised that she was allergic to dragon! This was very nice.