Comments | hp100: Control

wulfkub in hp100

Control

Apr 23, 2006 23:57

Title: Control
House: Gryffindor
Rating: PG
Characters: Theodore and Draco
Challenge: Is that a Challenge?
Word Count: 100
A/N: God, I am tired. Very very very brain dead atm. Someone give me a title for this ( Read more... )

challenge: is that a challenge, rating: pg, author: wulfkub

Comments 12

olli_ander April 24 2006, 04:01:45 UTC

Wow. Theodore's hate for Draco is really intense, the images of broken bones and blood are chilling. Good job.

wulfkub April 24 2006, 04:06:57 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked.

bloodanna April 24 2006, 04:42:00 UTC

Ooh, I love this. The description is just wonderful.

As for a title, hmm, how about 'Broken Dreams'?

wulfkub April 24 2006, 11:26:34 UTC

Oh, I like that! Thanks!

effulgency April 24 2006, 10:30:57 UTC

Very powerful. Amazing work. You are able to show such intense emotion in just 100 words. Wow! Great job!

wulfkub April 24 2006, 11:26:59 UTC

*G* thank you!

yura_slash April 24 2006, 15:55:10 UTC

you made me hate draco! how could you?

excellent work, and in 100 words! um... title... how about "In Control" ?

wulfkub April 24 2006, 16:37:22 UTC

Sorry, lol, I was just channeling Theodore...

And thanks!

vstone April 24 2006, 20:39:12 UTC

That was awesome! I'm an avid fan of Draco, but I completely understand Nott in this drabble.. Great writing.

wulfkub April 24 2006, 21:28:11 UTC

*G* thanks!