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Memories

Mar 19, 2006 22:34

Title: Memories ( Read more... )

challenge: magical items and devices, author: youngest_one

Comments 16

paradisacorbasi March 20 2006, 04:58:50 UTC

Oh, very good.

Excellent between-the-pages story.

youngest_one March 20 2006, 06:35:57 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

quimtessence March 20 2006, 05:34:21 UTC

Very nice. I'm especially fond of the very last line, which I think is quite brilliant. :)

I'd like to point out two typos, though: 'remanant' should be 'remnant' and 'postition' 'position.'

Good job.

~Luciana

youngest_one March 20 2006, 06:36:13 UTC

Thanks for catching that! And I'm glad you enjoyed it.

ianinna March 20 2006, 07:14:02 UTC

Well done, lovey. Well done. And the last line is absolutely perfect. *squees*

youngest_one March 21 2006, 01:41:28 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

katshakespeare March 20 2006, 13:41:14 UTC

Love it. Definitely perfect "missing scene" :D

youngest_one March 21 2006, 01:41:39 UTC

Thank you!

essentialjoy March 20 2006, 14:15:51 UTC

Yes, very nice. So Lupin.

youngest_one March 21 2006, 01:41:56 UTC

Glad it felt like Lupin to you.