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keever in hp100

Instinct

Dec 10, 2005 04:06

Title: Instinct
House: Hufflepuff
Word Count: 100
Characters/Pairings: James, Lily, and newborn Harry
Author's Notes: I can't believe it's been a year since I last posted here. For the "constant vigilance" challenge ( Read more... )

lily potter, author: keever, james potter, challenge: constant vigilance, harry potter

Comments 16

neffable December 10 2005, 11:31:17 UTC

Aw, this was so lovely up until the last line. Then it just made me teary :D

Fabulous work!

keever December 10 2005, 23:32:44 UTC

Thank you!

ex_cloak December 10 2005, 11:58:02 UTC

You never fail to hit the spot.

keever December 10 2005, 23:50:34 UTC

That's an excellent compliment. Thanks.

lisabird December 10 2005, 12:52:35 UTC

Awwwwwwww! Love this. Love your icon, too. Gold stars all around! :D

keever December 10 2005, 23:53:53 UTC

Thanks. I can barely look at the icon without getting misty.

iamisaac December 10 2005, 13:02:52 UTC

Oh gods, that rings so true, especially with a fairly new son myself...

keever December 10 2005, 23:55:26 UTC

Glad to hear it. Thanks.

morbidmoogle December 10 2005, 18:03:47 UTC

The entire thing made me feel so happy for James, but I got shivers at the last line. The irony of it made my heart go out to him.

keever December 10 2005, 23:58:40 UTC

I am for the pain, I do. Thanks.

keever December 11 2005, 03:41:53 UTC

Er, aim. Aim for the pain. Just not for the proofreading, apparently.