...What You Wish For

[bloodanna]

Title: ...What You Wish For
Character[s]: Snape
Words: 100
House: Ravenclaw
Challenge: The Dark Mark

He wanted to be different (a small teenager kneeling in the mud with the taste of pumpkin juice lingering in his mouth).
Wanted to be to be independent (words of devotion to a master he doesn't believe in cut through the silence like a howler

Comments

[freckles42]

OOooh. I like the style of this very much. Nicely written.

[bloodanna]

Thank you!
I was pleased with how it turned out. :)

[dizilla]

I love the juxtaposition here. Superbly done. ^_^

[bloodanna]

Thank you!
This actualy started out as two different bits of writing, I'm glad so many people like it combined. :)

[coastal_artist]

Wow. This was very unique. I enjoyed reading it.

[bloodanna]

coastal_artist like something I did?!
*faints from happiness*

[coastal_artist]

Errr...*blushes*

[danirosealoise]

Poor Snape

[migratory]

Very good. Love the repetition and the powerful images, but most of all I like the ending.