Rêverie/As Patient as the Sea/Priorities

[likeasecret]

Title: Rêverie

Comments

[gal_montag]

Will you accept con-crit if I give it?

[likeasecret]

Sure, I am always looking for input.

[gal_montag]

Okay. My only thing is this: on the last story? You should do more research on Native Americans. It's kind of... I hate to say offensive, because I know you didn't mean to be, but I can't think of a better word.

Point taken

[likeasecret]

Understandable. I am actually pretty well versed in Native American culture and the history of pre-Columbian America... this was just something silly. I wanted to show the American school in 100 words and in that short span of words most things will come out very awkwardly, especially when you are trying to describe people in five words.

It was also a way for me to express my own distaste for Thanksgiving, but somehow I thought having the little goth white boy blowing up the table might not make as much sense.

Thanks though. I will keep that in mind. I like being offensive, but not in a racial stereotype sort of way.

[anonymous]

Gabrielle's ambition is hilarious! I love that drabble it really made me smile!

[wulfkub]

Hehe, I liked them all.

Even as a Cherokee...