Comments | hp100: Prison Party/Slumber Party

wulfkub in hp100

Prison Party/Slumber Party

Nov 13, 2005 22:43

Title: Prison Party
House: Gryffindor
Rating: PG
Characters: Sirius and Bella
Challenge: Party
Word Count: 100
Notes: I would take the opportunity to torture her too.

Idly leaning against the door of his cell, Sirius looked at Bellatrix, “So, Crouch finally caught you, cousin. Are we expecting anyone else, then? Lucius? Narcissa ( Read more... )

challenge: party, trio, rating: pg, author: wulfkub, sirius/bellatrix

Comments 6

author_by_night November 14 2005, 03:39:02 UTC

To the first one - creepy!

To the last one - aw, sad. Painfully realistic as well.

wulfkub November 14 2005, 03:42:57 UTC

Thanks!

LOL! Icon adoration...I've never seen a moose, a mountie, or an igloo all the times I went to Canada either.

funkifi3d_m3 November 14 2005, 04:55:41 UTC

Ooo I love the first one the most, though the second one is good as well.

“Still spouting the party line, Bella?”
Too cool. Love your choice of using the word 'party'. ^_^

wulfkub November 14 2005, 13:05:24 UTC

Thanks!

I saw that no one else had used it yet...

whiterosemaiden November 14 2005, 05:57:39 UTC

I like the first one, lots. I can picture it clearly in my mind, it's definitely what both would say.
And the second one was good. It's so true.. and it's a scary thought that teenagers are the main ones going to war. They're too young to have this burden! =(

wulfkub November 14 2005, 13:07:24 UTC

Thanks! Bella and Sirius are always very clear to me how they would speak (I can only wish the rest of them were as loud in my head).

The second one felt very Ender's Game to me when I was writing it. I don't know if that came across to anyone else...