Uncoil / What Dreams May Come

[ilthit]

Title: Uncoil
Author: Hyel
Challenge: Elements: Fire
House: Slytherin
Word Count: 100
Character: Petunia
Rating: PG-13 for violence
Author's Notes: This kind of goes with my earlier drabble The Making of Another Soldier.

Comments

[bozaloshtsh]

Really like the second one.

[ilthit]

Thank you!

[geeksicle]

Wow. These are intense. I love the first, the idea that Petunia is not such a Muggle as she likes everyone to think, and the second is terrifying. The thought of being in that position... urg. These are amazing.

[ilthit]

Wow, thank you!

[dizilla]

For it being Halloween season, the second one was fantastic. The Petunia one was very intriguing. Good job! ^_^

[ilthit]

Thank you!

[wulfkub]

God, the second one is horribly powerful.

I do love the first one as well.

[ilthit]

Thank you!

[hpbutterfly]

YOWZA. Intense is a good word for these. Great word for these. I love the first one. I hope she kicks all their asses.

The second was is...GREAT. Great idea. I wish I could be more helpful!

[ilthit]

Ah, thank you! I am wildly curious about Petunia and almost convinced she's really a witch.

[hpbutterfly]

As cool as that would be, for Petunia to really be a witch, I sort of feel like it'd be a happy-ending cop-out for JKR, you know? I'd almost feel the same kind of betrayal I'd feel if Harry were to wake up and it was all just a dream. lalala

[ilthit]

Oh, hah! I don't think that would be a HAPPY thing in any sense. It means she's been suppressing and denying her nature for years, running away into normal things; that she has something inside her that she loathes, that her husband would loathe, like a dirty, dirty secret.