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azkabanpixie in hp100

Four

Oct 16, 2005 05:05

Title: Four ( Read more... )

prongs, padfoot, sirius/remus, author: azkabanpixie, marauders, wormtail, challenge: the elements

Comments 7

antonia_east October 16 2005, 13:30:05 UTC

Fabulous - I love it when those four elements are applied intelligently to characters. I think you mean 'quiet nature' for Remus, though.

animimares October 16 2005, 16:22:03 UTC

This is so beautiful. Fantastic. The words flow very well and the things you've managed to say in 100 simple words. Wow. This is art, and I love it!

~ animimares

azkabanpixie October 16 2005, 22:06:27 UTC

Thanks! Massive <3's to you both. Your right I did mean quite, evil typos!

anonymous October 16 2005, 23:18:03 UTC

fire will not burn brightly without air

*smiles* Yup, R/S, but hey, it just adds more love. I adore these types of things--applying elements to people--when done well, and this definitely is. Awesome job.

Peter is water: a nervous mass of emotion that will eventually destroy fire.

^^Probably one of my favorite metaphorical descriptions of Peter.

alice_pike October 16 2005, 23:18:29 UTC

Me, by the way. Stupid log in...

dizilla October 17 2005, 06:48:52 UTC

Ah, simply fantastic! ^_^ The last line is so true and is sad. Good job!

wulfkub October 18 2005, 03:03:27 UTC

Lovely and well done. Love the Peter description.