Comments | hp100: Afire

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Afire

Oct 15, 2005 19:53

Title: Afire
House: Slytherin
Word Count: 100
Characters/Pairings: Harry/Draco
Rating: R
Challenge: Smoke
Author's Notes: This isn’t exactly pr0n, but… emotional smex.
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( Open your eyes… )

harry/draco, rating: r, author: animimares, challenge: smoke

Comments 8

julia_fractal October 15 2005, 18:14:24 UTC

Wow! Your drabble's packed with emotional intensity and hotness, and fitting all that into 100 words is an impressive feat indeed!

animimares October 15 2005, 19:04:15 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked and a bit proud that you think I did a good job in this one. This is my first try with erotica, and I'm glad it seemed to have turned out all right.

Thank you for reviewing!

~ animimares

aurora_enkeli October 15 2005, 18:37:24 UTC

Completely had to clamber out of my lurking to say:

Wow.

Gorgeous, erotic and ...well Harry and Draco!

Rora.

animimares October 15 2005, 19:01:29 UTC

Oh, thank you so very much. This is the first time I write anything erotic HD, so I'm glad you think it turned out all right. And that I got Harry and Draco IC. That's something that is very important to me.

Thank you for reviewing. I'm glad you liked.

~ animimares

waterbird October 15 2005, 18:52:05 UTC

I love the tiny hint of doubt at the end, like Harry isn't really sure Draco is capable of love. Nice.

animimares October 15 2005, 19:06:43 UTC

Thank you so much for noticing that. In my eyes Harry will always doubt if Draco really loves him or just enjoys the sex too much to want to bugger off (something I do see him capable off) But in this I also try to imagine that Draco actually does love Harry. That would be nice for a change... am too used to angsty HD by now.

Thank you for reviewing, glad you liked!

~ animimares

alice_pike October 15 2005, 19:24:29 UTC

Woah. This is angsty yet very emotional H/D, and I love the dynamic between them. That last line pretty much sums up what I think Harry feels about Malfoy most of the time, and I have to wonder how much angst I've actually read in order to be used to that, because it's completely heartbreaking.

animimares October 15 2005, 19:37:30 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you liked.

Yeah, it's sad isn't it? Poor Harry - and poor Draco, too. I think Draco could actually love Harry, but he's just not that great at showing emotions outside the bed. And Harry needs that. That'll be tough on them.

Angst rules when it comes to HD, but yes, it's the most heartbreaking stuff you get "used to".

Thanks again for reviewing, I'm glad you liked.

~ animimares