Comments | hp100: Protection/Smoking/Opiate Dreams/Heaven Help Her

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Protection/Smoking/Opiate Dreams/Heaven Help Her

Oct 11, 2005 23:25

Title: Protection
House: Gryffindor
Rating: PG-13
Characters: The Trio
Challenge: Smoke
Word Count: 100
Notes: Cute, I think. Obviously set on PoA before Hermione walks out ( Read more... )

hermione granger, rating: pg-13, draco malfoy, trio, severus snape, author: wulfkub, narcissa malfoy, harry potter, ron weasley

Comments 10

darlingfox October 12 2005, 08:07:49 UTC

I don't know which one I like the most, the first or the last drabble. The first is almost too cute for words and the last... Ouch. You are evil. ^_^

wulfkub October 12 2005, 11:31:14 UTC

*WEG* thanks!

freedomrhodes October 12 2005, 12:31:10 UTC

Yes, you are very evil indeed. :D Loved the first one, very nice Ron and Harry. My favorite was Opiate Dreams which I'd love to read in an expanded story.

wulfkub October 12 2005, 15:17:30 UTC

Hehe! So glad you all agree with me. I'm thinking I need to expand OD as well...it's one of those that I had to cut severly to get to 100 words...

sor_bet October 12 2005, 13:28:30 UTC

The first one is so nice.

The second one, for me, was totally Draco. Not only was he stressed out all of 6th year, I can imagine that he'd hate being dependent on a filthy Muggle habit.

The idea of a smoke version of something like Veritaserum is very interesting. But keep that bitch away from my Sev. :-)

And the last one? Ahem. No words to describe my feelings, just a BEG. >:-D

wulfkub October 12 2005, 15:20:22 UTC

Thanks.

And, oh my, you're totally right. That one works for Draco in ways it doesn't work for Theodore or Blaise.

Veritaserum = opium, in my ahhh experience. You'd be amazed what people will babble under opiates...

*WEG*

dizilla October 13 2005, 02:50:37 UTC

The first was very cute, gotta love the trio! The second is nicely done. Third one was evil but lovely. XD Third one was evil too, but interesting. Fantastic work as always! =D

wulfkub October 13 2005, 03:12:04 UTC

Thanks, much! Off to coerce the muse for the evening...

alice_pike October 15 2005, 18:31:03 UTC

The first one is totally cute. Like I audibly went, "Aww!"

The second, while it doesn't fit him in present canon, it totally Ron for me. I guess I'm picturing it more post-war or at least a futuristic!Ron.

The third, omg for once I actually like Narcissa. (And okay, it might be partially because I hate Snape so much, so serves him right). It kinda weirds me out though, the thought that she would make Bella tell him, meaning that Bella actually cares about her family. That image of her even in HBP seemed like such a contrast, but it's one more thing I love about her.

My nose still hurts from snorting from the last one. Oh, the last line dost slay me! And my my, the persuasive powers of that boy...

wulfkub October 15 2005, 22:33:55 UTC

Cool!

And, yeah, I could totally see that as postwar!Ron as well.

Narcissa is such a bitch and so is Bella but I bet the two of them would totally goodcopbadcop! anyone that stood in their way. And I do believe Bella is faithful to her family, in her own fashion.

Let's just say, were he a bit older...*WEG*.