Comments | hp100: Only Heartache

wulfkub in hp100

Only Heartache

Aug 02, 2005 16:16

Title: Only Heartache
Character: Draco and Snape
Rating: R for language
Challenge: The Ten Commandments
Word Count: 100
House: Gryffindor
Author Notes: Why is it whenever I write Snape and Draco, Draco comes out looking like a ninny? Bah, sorry for spamming, got bit by a plot bunny and I won’t be OL again til well past bedtime ( Read more... )

author: wulfkub, challenge: ten commandments

Comments 10

rosedemon August 2 2005, 21:48:46 UTC

Draco will not be a match for him any way you look at it..

nice work..:D

wulfkub August 3 2005, 03:42:25 UTC

But he still shouldn't sound so...ninnyfied.

Thanks!

stasia August 2 2005, 22:38:49 UTC

I love love love that he almost calls Draco a ferret.

Perfect.

Stasia

wulfkub August 3 2005, 03:42:49 UTC

Hehe, thanks!

wirelesstouch August 3 2005, 00:02:56 UTC

Oh, that was really, really good! It was funny and truthful and dark all at the same time... yes, it explains quite a lot. I also like the slight Narcissa/Snape (Snarci, haha) undertones...

wulfkub August 3 2005, 03:45:27 UTC

Snarci, hah!

I'm glad you liked it.

starlit_kitty August 3 2005, 10:47:41 UTC

he does sound a little ninnyfied, but i think its unavoidable in this setting

*giggles* oh so nearly a ferret. and a telling off from cissy *glee*

keep up the good work

wulfkub August 3 2005, 10:52:36 UTC

I think it was unavoidable in this one, in particular.

Thanks!

starlit_kitty August 3 2005, 10:59:51 UTC

your welcome darlin

radiophonic August 3 2005, 21:22:21 UTC

Hey, I like ninny!Draco. <3 Love the last line.