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Silent Pleas/Draco's Imperio/Hiding Mistakes/Sow the Reaper

Jul 19, 2005 13:49

Title: Silent Pleas
House: Gryffindor
Rating: PG
Characters: Voldemort and Narcissa
Challenge: Changes
Word Count: 100
A/N: The four of these kind of go together but they definatly all stand alone. Mostly, they are together in terms of the timeline.

( Silent Pleas - Spoilers )

author: wulfkub, challenge: changes

Comments 22

paradisacorbasi July 19 2005, 18:34:17 UTC

These are all very powerful and brilliant. The second one, though, is the one that gets me the most. Snape having to use what he knows from the Dark side to protect.

Now I have a Mace Windu/Snape thing inmy head and I want it to go away now, plzkthx. o.O

wulfkub July 19 2005, 19:23:46 UTC

Thanks much! Ah, you meant the third one, right? LOL. That was actually the first thing that crossed my mind when Snape was arguing with Draco in HBP...that Snape was going to end up protecting Draco from himself.

paradisacorbasi July 20 2005, 02:16:51 UTC

Yes, I meant the third.

And I knew from the moment he agreed to it for Narcissa that Snape was going to be put a position where he'd have to keep that unbreakable vow.

wulfkub July 20 2005, 02:23:53 UTC

Ok *G*, just wanted to clear that up.

myonlylight July 19 2005, 20:59:16 UTC

These are lovely. My favorites are 2 and 3. Very good.

wulfkub July 19 2005, 21:29:47 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked my favorites them!

catrinella July 19 2005, 21:06:23 UTC

Oh, I loved #3! "...casually cursing Rosmerta when she turned around" - so Snape-y.

wulfkub July 19 2005, 21:30:43 UTC

That's is, believe it or not, the first time I've written Snape. I'm surprised it turned out as well as it did, to tell you the truth.

Thanks for the R&R!

wirelesstouch July 19 2005, 21:13:34 UTC

Ooh, these were all great! My faves were two and four. I liked two cause it gets you to realize how powerful Draco's become, and it kind of makes you scared. Well, it makes me scared. And four, I liked cause he's starting to realize now not-so-fun it's become. "...throwing up even the memory of breakfast," I like that...

wulfkub July 19 2005, 21:32:32 UTC

Power has a price...hummmm *smack drabble in head, 'not til tomorrow you silly thing'* sorry, the next one just formed and I dont have time for it atm.

I am glad you liked them.

wirelesstouch July 20 2005, 02:18:39 UTC

Ooh, hurry, haha!

wulfkub July 20 2005, 02:26:04 UTC

Tomorrow, hopefully. I am posting all my drabble (119 at last count) on my website so that is eating into my writing time but I need to get that done.

alice_pike July 19 2005, 22:30:04 UTC

Ooohh, I really like all of them, the second especially. I'd like to see more of what Bella did to help Draco. I like what the third one implies about Draco, lol. I'm such a sucker for him, really. Nice job on them all.

wulfkub July 19 2005, 23:59:50 UTC

I'd like to know more about what Bella and he did over the summer too. I have a feeling, if I really want to know, I'm going to have to invent it.

I'm just really glad that Draco has finally moved from being a 2D character to a 3D...and all in a couple of pages.

alice_pike July 20 2005, 02:26:05 UTC

Ahh, inventing the canon that JKR doesn't write (kind of an oxymoron, no?) is fanfic at its best. (I hope you get what I mean by that, lol).

I am so happy for the Draco in this book. Sure, he's not what I wanted, but at least he's SOMETHING, which is more than we can say about any other book. The transition was fast, but well-awaited so it was all good. He was always capable of being a major (well, bigger) character, so I'm glad he finally is.

wulfkub July 20 2005, 02:29:15 UTC

Yeah, I got it *G* Sorta like what I wanted to do with Buffy but never finished before the last season...

Yeah, the transition was a bit abrupt but it worked well, I think. Of course, that all goes back to my insistance that the book should have been at least another 200 pages...

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