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Falling/Memories

Mar 17, 2005 21:06

Title: Falling
House: Gryffindor
Word Count: 100
Challenge: Me, Myself and I
Rating: PG
Characters: Hermione
Author's Notes: She tripped and fell for (Harry/Ron). Take your pick.

I trembled the first time you touched me as more than a friend. Did you realize just how badly that single touch, your hand on mine, affected me? I know you got it when you ( Read more... )

challenge: me myself and i, author: wulfkub

Comments 7

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wulfkub March 18 2005, 02:19:08 UTC

Thank you, very much.

forluck_yousaid March 18 2005, 02:27:11 UTC

the first one made me smile, and the second one is so sad,

good job!!

wulfkub March 18 2005, 02:31:00 UTC

Thanks!

anonymous March 18 2005, 22:07:00 UTC

I remember leaning my head on the icy glass, wishing that I could be as cold as you.
:-) Major props!

wulfkub March 21 2005, 00:25:46 UTC

Thanks!

alice_pike March 19 2005, 01:47:53 UTC

I liked the first one, but I love the second one. It's very well-written and I love the last line, it's a very good ending; abrupt yet final. Well done.

wulfkub March 21 2005, 00:22:36 UTC

Thank you, very much, for the compliments.