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knawty_knickers in hp100

Look At Them

Feb 14, 2005 20:34

Title: Look At Them - Part I
Word Count: 100
Char/Pairings: Draco/Pansy
Challenge: Valentine's Day
House: Slytherin
A/N: Caution: mild language/sexual reference ( Read more... )

draco malfoy, author: knawty_knickers, pansy parkinson, challenge: valentine's day

Comments 4

bardha February 15 2005, 14:20:29 UTC

I love this juxtaposition! Pansy's is particularly interesting. I'd like to see more of this side of her.

Mm...you maybe should have used an lj-cut, considering the language and subject. *shrug*

knawty_knickers February 15 2005, 21:54:55 UTC

Yeesss.. I was debating whether or not to cut it, but in the end, I decided not too (obviously) because I noticed the drabble before mine, or one of them (I can't remember which), was a bit more shady than mine. Oh well. I'm glad you liked it. ^^

sor_bet February 15 2005, 19:26:26 UTC

Wow, fabulous characterization and inner monologue on both. I can never get my Draco to sound so, well, Draco. Funny last line in the first one.
And Pansy's POV -- very different and interesting. I'd like to see her rebel one of these days, but it will probably have to take place in fanfic.

knawty_knickers February 15 2005, 22:00:49 UTC

Thanks for the Draco compliment! I never actually thought my characterizations of Draco could actually pass for true, because I'm just not as much of an evil jerk as he.

And I got sick of everyone passing off Pansy as pug-faced and clingy. She's as much a woman as Hermione, just raised differently, and perhaps with different objectives.