Comments | hp100: As the Grave, Walls, Crack, No Particular Reason, Soreness and Softness, Sleep, "I Am Not Here"

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As the Grave, Walls, Crack, No Particular Reason, Soreness and Softness, Sleep, "I Am Not Here"

Jan 20, 2005 22:19

Title: As the Grave ( Read more... )

author: bluejeanphoenix, ron, hermione, tonks, harry, trio, ron weasley, sirius, hermione granger, molly weasley, ron weasley/hermione granger, sirius black, challenge: late, the trio, harry potter, nymphadora tonks

Comments 16

dymphna_gold January 21 2005, 18:12:35 UTC

These are beautiful. I think I liked the last one the best, although it's hard to pick a favourite. I like that Harry has finally accepted that Sirius has moved on and is finding comfort in the thought that he's in a happier place. It makes me all teary, but in a good way. :)

bluejeanphoenix January 21 2005, 21:31:00 UTC

Thank you! I'm really glad that you liked it...and yes, that's exactly what I was trying to say in the last one! :)

winding_path January 21 2005, 22:05:09 UTC

You know what the major problem with your drabbles is? I'm running out of synanoms for "excellent," "lovely," and "brilliant." So for these drabbles, I'll just go with those. Harry's mood is captured quite believably, and his evolution from the first the first of these to the last is well-paced and quite plausible.

As far as details I love . . . well, it's been much mentioned, but I love Hermione slapping Harry. That he says "I love you" to the ceiling. And I love the sentiment of the last one -- though I think I preferred your longer version (review in hp100uncut).

bluejeanphoenix January 22 2005, 20:28:25 UTC

:lol: :blush:

I'm so glad that you like them :) And thank you for the awesome, in-depth review...I'm especially pleased that the evolution is "well-paced."

Yeah, I wish I could've used the longer version here! :lol: Oh well :)