Gone / Her Hopes / First Kiss

[keever]

Title: Gone
House: Gryffindor
Word Count: 100
Characters/Pairings: Mrs. Prewett, Molly, Arthur
Author's Notes: For the "late" challenge

Comments

[dymphna_gold]

I love these. Especially "Her Hopes." I have a lot of pity for the Squibs. They don't really belong anywhere, do they? Poor Arabella. You captured her sadness and disappointment beautifully.

The last one is great, too. Someone needs to give Ron a few hints, I think.

[keever]

Thanks. As do I. It must be horrible to be stuck between two worlds without really belonging to either of them.

[weasleyofrohan]

Wonderful! I loved them all! The first one was heartwrenching, the second was oh so sad, and the third was simply wonderful:) I really felt for all the characters:)

[keever]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked them.

[miraminx]

These were excellent. Mrs. Prewett's desperation to believe that her sons are still alive rings really true. Arabella's mother's encouragement broke my heart for both of them. And thanks for the last one-- very true to both characters!

[keever]

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed them.

[bluejeanphoenix]

I like how the Prewett's remind me of the Weasley household :) And Arthur as the young beau, trying to be supportive without being obtrusive...

The middle one really depressed me :( i guess that was the plan, though! :lol:

But WOW I especially love that last one...very IC for both of them, and I could see something small like that being hte one thing that makes Hermione say, "okay, my fears were unfounded, he really does care" :)

Nicely done, and good punchline!

[keever]

Thanks. I do like to bring the angst and inflict it upon others. I'm evil that way.

Glad you liked.

[frozentemptress]

All three are absolutely beautiful. ♥

[keever]

Thank you.