Comments | hp100: Harry's/Hermione's/Ron's/Ginny's

bluejeanphoenix in hp100

Harry's/Hermione's/Ron's/Ginny's

Dec 22, 2004 02:04

The Boggart Series: Because it’s always hard to face your worst fear…(err, hope that fits the challenge :-D ( Read more... )

hermione granger, author: bluejeanphoenix, ron hermione, ron, unnamed student, ron weasley/hermione granger, tom riddle, hermione, harry, challenge: hard, ginny weasley, ginny, harry potter, ron weasley

Comments 23

maidengurl December 22 2004, 14:35:33 UTC

Wow, each one is very well crafted. Again, it is hard to pick one over another as a favorite. I really liked the last one though.

bluejeanphoenix December 23 2004, 06:43:35 UTC

Thank you! :) I'm really glad you liked them!

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bluejeanphoenix December 23 2004, 06:45:33 UTC

:blush:

I did not...

Thank you though, that's an awesome thing to say! :)

eldee_fic December 22 2004, 16:00:39 UTC

These were all very well done! You captured each persons fears perfectly, and I really thought you did a great job with each and every one. Beautiful and haunting.

bluejeanphoenix December 23 2004, 06:45:59 UTC

Thank you! :) Haunting is such a great word...thank you so much!

yma2 December 22 2004, 19:30:37 UTC

Very nice, the first one was almost prophetic, in my opinion and can be taken in several, interesting ways, which I really like. Certainly the characterisation is fantastic. Ron's was very good too, the last few lines took my breath away and, in my opinion, reflected how Ron has grown. The more we get older the more we come to be afraid of realistic things. At a young age we fear spiders and snakes, as we get older things like death and pain, realistic things, come higher on our list. This shows Ron's maturity very well.
The last was my least favorite, but still an excellent drabble. crafted excellently I could 'hear' the voices of the students and I could easily visulise it happening in the book.
Three brillient drabbles. Well done, what an excellent collection.

bluejeanphoenix December 23 2004, 06:47:32 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

"The more we get older the more we come to be afraid of realistic things."

YES...you're so dead-on...Wow, you really put that into words very well!!

Thank you very much for the great feedback :)

garoul December 22 2004, 21:56:46 UTC

Excellent drabbles. Harry's and Hermione's boggarts are so creepy yet believable. Ron's was disturbing in ways a brother should never have to think about. Good use of dialog in Ginny's to convey both her fears and the misunderstanding of the class.

bluejeanphoenix December 24 2004, 21:42:43 UTC

Thank you :) Yeah, I was gonna write it from her perspective, and then I thought it would be fun to shift it around a bit.

Glad you liked them! :)