Harry/Ron/Hermione/Peter

[bluejeanphoenix]

Title: Harry
House: Hufflepuff (C’mon, Badgers!)
Challenge: Redemption
Words: 100
Characters: Harry
Author Notes: Aah! Attack of the last-minute drabble gaggles! Oh well, here’s mine. :-)

Comments

[nbcat]

Lovely set of drabbles. I particularly liked the pair Ron and Hermione (the R/Hr shipper in me peering out there); so Ron, so Hermione, so appropriate.

The first and last ones... wow. Powerful. Particularly: nothing he was, had, or achieved could ever be worth the loss. Not even victory.

[bluejeanphoenix]

Thanks! I'm really glad you liked them! :)

I'm a R/H shipper too...Can't beat a classic! :lol:

[altiloquent]

How is it that you can come up with four fantastic drabbles at the last second? *jealous face*

Very, very well done. The Ron/Hermione shipper in me is loving the middle two (Harry/Ron is rather upset about that) because they are absolutely perfect characterizations.

The first and last *chills* are wonderfully done as well though.

[bluejeanphoenix]

Desperation - poor Hufflepuff's always in last place! :lol:

I'm really glad you liked them! :) I know just what you mean about the ship thing....I'm a R/H shipper, but I have little "pet" ships that I like too, that are a lot more fanon...

Again, really glad you liked them! :) Thank you!

[winding_path]

See this is one of the reasons I don't like multi-drabble posts. If I tell you what I love about each one, we're going to be here till next Thursday. Briefly, then -- 1: Poor Harry. You've done a nice job expressing the pressure of being the only person who can solve the problem (and it's not like Harry volunteered for the job!). 2 & 3: Yay for in character Ron/Hermione! The voices are perfect (I like the idea that behind that mostly collected exterior, Hermione has an inner Bridget Jones), and Ron's description of Krum is priceless. As for 4: This almost reads like one half of an argument, and makes me wonder what the other voice inside his head is saying. Breaking off in the middle of Wormtail is inspired.

It's official -- I love your drabbles. May I friend you?

[bluejeanphoenix]

Hahaha! Sorry 'bout that...it's definitely a phenomenon, though, the last-minute-drabble-gaggle! hehe!

the voices are perfect

WOW, thank you for that!

Hermione has an inner Bridget Jones

YES!!! She totally does...I can just hear her mind ticking away when I read sometimes... tee-hee!

And your comment about it being half hte argument - perfect! :)

Of course you can friend me! :)

I'm so happy...awesome review, thank you so much! :)

[winding_path]

You've been friended! And you're welcome. It's easy to write you awesome reviews -- you do awesome work.

[bluejeanphoenix]

:Blush:

:)

[bardha]

They're all great. 'Hermione' made me laugh out loud; I think cutting out the pronouns adds to the humor of it somehow. 'Peter' is my favorite, though. It's a great piece of characterization, and I like the 'ask Snape' bit.

[bluejeanphoenix]

Thank you :) I have to credit Helen Fielding (of Bridget Jones) for the cutting the pronouns idea...sounds very methodical and organized, which is hysterical next to completely disorganized thinking...

I'm really glad you liked Peter...and yeah, the "ask Snape" line is my favorite, too! :)

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed them!