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The Token

Dec 16, 2004 23:48

Title: The Token ( Read more... )

author: jetamors, severus snape, rating: pg

Comments 9

winding_path December 17 2004, 05:33:35 UTC

Interesting. A clever play on the idea of redeem. One note: did you mean "cash and priZes" rather than "cash and priCes"?

jetamors December 17 2004, 12:37:24 UTC

Aargh! *fixes* I'm glad you liked it otherwise, though.

winding_path December 17 2004, 16:52:11 UTC

No worries. Typos happen to the best of us!

altiloquent December 17 2004, 05:49:22 UTC

Oooh, what a fantastic metaphor. I think you captured Snape quite well.

jetamors December 17 2004, 12:37:48 UTC

Thank you very much!

divinereverie December 17 2004, 16:46:57 UTC

Very good metaphor :D I like I how you show how what happened affected him subtlely.

jetamors December 18 2004, 17:28:49 UTC

Thanks. I like to think that it was a gradual process that converted Snape, instead of one big thing. Though I hope Jo will tell us in the next two books.

bardha December 18 2004, 18:15:28 UTC

I like the 'ant colony' metaphor. I think it's very Snape.

jetamors December 18 2004, 19:16:59 UTC

Thank you. It seemed very Snapish to me also.