Comments | hp100: Untitled 1, Untitled 2, Untitled 3

bluejeanphoenix in hp100

Untitled 1, Untitled 2, Untitled 3

Dec 13, 2004 01:36

Title: Untitled #1 - 3. (I couldn’t find one for these…suggestions?)
House: Hufflepuff
Challenge: Redemption
Words: 100
Characters: Ron/Hermione
Author Notes: This plot bunny bit HARD as I was doing chores tonight…These are a series, but they stand on their own.

Untitled #1

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hermione granger, author: bluejeanphoenix, challenge: redemption, ron hermione, ron, ron weasley/hermione granger, post-war, hermione, crookshanks, ron weasley

Comments 8

altiloquent December 13 2004, 07:38:19 UTC

*squee* I love future Hermione/Ron, especially when done so well. Hooray!

bluejeanphoenix December 13 2004, 16:36:03 UTC

Thank you kindly! :)

sarisa December 13 2004, 12:36:47 UTC

Funny, well spun, and warm cushy bits abounding. I must reiterate the Ron/Hermione love; also, the way in which you seem to have perfected the drabble form, and integrated the idea of redemption. Excellent!

bluejeanphoenix December 13 2004, 16:36:55 UTC

Perfected?! Oh my gawd! :lol:

Thank you very much! I'm totally...thunderstruck, I guess is the word! :lol:

Thank you!

spikeyboots December 13 2004, 13:27:43 UTC

Perfect sugary night time reading! So very sweet - love the three part moments - love that you based them around Crookshanks - v. creative! Favourite is no. 2 - esp. “Shall I fetch the master list, or would a brief summary suffice?”

And, *sigh*, your Ron-logic is too cute.

bluejeanphoenix December 13 2004, 16:38:35 UTC

Thank you very much :) The Ron-logic was actually me-logic...I'd been watching Hitchhiker's Guide, and then set to cleaning out the catboxes for my boyfriend's SEVEN cats, and I just thought, "hang on here...I'M the dominant species!" It just suddenly struck me as very funny :)

I'm really glad you enjoyed! :)

winding_path December 13 2004, 14:28:26 UTC

These are lovely -- you handle Ron and Hermione very well, the dialogue is really and truly in their voices. My favorite lines have to be “That’s ‘Hermione’ for ‘apologize,’ isn’t it?” and “Shall I fetch the master list, or would a brief summary suffice?” but really, I love all three of them. And I like the little twist at the end.

I'm bad with titles, but my normal approach when I'm stuck is to pull a phrase from the story itself. Not sure if they will help.

bluejeanphoenix December 13 2004, 16:39:29 UTC

Thank you very much! :) I love writing R/H. Their relationship kinda reminds me of my own...lotsa feistiness, but lots of love, too...

That's a very good suggestion...I shall ponder it.