Blood

[lazy_neutrino]

House: Gryffindor
Words: 100
Challenge: Law
Characters: Remus, Snape
A/N: Why I couldn't have thought of this last week, I'll never know.

Blood

‘No,’ Harry whispered. ‘No‘Harry, sit down.’ Remus’ voice was tired

Comments

[bluejeanphoenix]

I concurr, Snape is just creepy and awful in this...in a very good way! :) Seems like exactly the sort of thing he'd do, just to make Lupin a bit more miserable.

[lazy_neutrino]

Yes, I can see him pouring the blood down the drain every fortnight, not bothering to look for a use. Can't you?

[bluejeanphoenix]

Eeyugh. Gives me the willies. :) Bastard. ::little chibi heart::

[neotoma]

So, so Snape. Such a bastard.

[lazy_neutrino]

Yep! And fascinating to watch. I love reading a good Snape - I'm just starting to get hooked on them.

[garoul]

*jaw drops* Such a simple sentence, with such cruelty behind it. This is truly an impressive piece of dialog. I wish more writers understood the power of understated threats.

[lazy_neutrino]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I agree with you - I like the power behind the words when I read a fic - the things not said. So much scope for angst there, too - I love writing Remus and the things he doesn't say, if you know what I mean.

[altiloquent]

Fantastic, but *shivers* Snape is eeeeeeeevil. But I do love him so. Well done.

[lazy_neutrino]

Thanks very much. Yes, definitely evil - and I love him too. He's like my inner child.

[sevter]

*cackle* Sev is just so Snape-ish. Completely adorable. I love your Severus.

[lazy_neutrino]

Thank you! I've not written much Snape, but he's kind of addictive, isn't he?