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Jul 25, 2004 22:09

Six for Ravenclaw. I don't think I've ever written so many at once.
Most of these titles really suck. Better suggestions are welcome.

Title: Rush
Words: 100
Characters/Pairings: Sirius/Remus
Rating: NC-17 for explicit oral sex

Rush )

hermione granger, author: celeria, sirius black, remus lupin, ginny weasley, harry potter, ron weasley, challenge: wet

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mooders July 26 2004, 02:33:18 UTC
I usually don't read posts when they have more than two or three, but since I recognised your icon and knew no ill thoughts towards it, I figure I should give your six a try. (That and I'm avoiding cleaning my room ;) )

Heh. I like how you started them all the same basic way.

Although Remus/Sirius isn't my OTP, I did like how you finished that drabble. The Tear vrs Come.

The Harry one was good. I liked the poety ending for that one.

The Ginny one was also good. Nice way of showing what happened in that scene in 100 words.

I like the Mark Evans one. Although is his trousers wet because he got shoved in the mud, or because he pee'd himself? (I admit I first thought he pee'd himself, but then thought maybe he was just pushed in the mud)

Heh. House Elfs rules. I liked that one. Not much to say but very creative. It probably could be expanded into a decent one-shot with all the models for that fountain.

The last one was probably my favorite. So amusing.

-Oowth

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thepastperfect July 26 2004, 16:38:11 UTC
thank you. i usually don't read (or post) so many drabbles in a cut; in fact, if they're behind a cut, i often don't read them at all. i know that's sort of dumb, but i don't do this normally; i just knew that i wanted to start them all the same way, and so it would have been pointless to post them individually over the week.

for the mark evans one, i meant for his pants to be wet because he fell on the grass/mud, although i never thought about him peeing himself. *g* we'll leave that one open for interpretation.

i think the last one is my favourite as well. i can't stay away from the femslash, i guess.

thank you for commenting!

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