A Gift for Queenb23more

[luvscharlie]

Title: Nothing More
Author: teenage_hustler
Recipient: queenb23more
Pairing(s): Albus Severus/Asteria, brief mentions of Draco/Asteria, Scorpius/OMC
Word Count: 8,000 or so.
Summary: I love how much she wants me. I love how she calls me, begging - yeah, BEGGING - me to go to her. And I love knowing that I’m the one that gets to choose whether or not I go to her. Of course, I

Comments

[rose_starr]

OH. MY. GOD.

Seriously.

OH. MY. GOD.

This!!!!

This is such an absolutely incredible story, and I am so thrilled and honored that you wrote it using my prompts!!!!

(and before I go any further, I am so sorry I didn't get to read it yesterday when it was posted; I've had computer problems all week, but our darling luvscharlie made sure I knew it was posted, and this is the first thing I came to immediately tonight

[teenage_hustler]

I have to admit, when I read this, I kind of felt the wind whistling through my ears at the impact of it. Thank you so much for such a detailed, amazing comment.

I'm so glad I made first person work for you here! I'm also more into 3rd person than first or 2nd, but I felt that this story kind of worked better in first person. I'm really happy you liked the characters. I so want to use that gay!Scorpius again.

I'm so happy you liked the smut! you gave me a lot to work with, so I thought I'd do you a favour and get as much of those scenarios you listed in there as possible. Yeah, mind games. Gotta love it.

Lastly, I want to thank you so much for the fantastic prompt you gave me! This pairing was so much fun to play around with, and I really, really enjoyed writing this story for you. Again, thanks so much for the review, and your awesomeness knows no bounds.

[lunalovepotter]

Wow. I am, quite literally, blown away. There is so much about this fic that I love it would be hard to put it into a single comment. So I'll just say: BRILLIANT.

Oh, and I might just be a little bit in love with your Al Potter. I've always seen him as this quiet, introspective kid but I rather like this version. ;)

[teenage_hustler]

Hello! Thanks so much for reading this! I don't really know how into this sort of story you are, so if it's not really your thing I appreciate your reading it.

Yeah, I love arsehole!Al, but I like nice!Al too. I'm conflicted. Truly.

btw, I have something for you. Check your inbox within the next 20 minutes or so.

[uniquepov]

Amazing. I love Al's 'being-an-absolute-bastard-ness,' Scorpius' love life (and his love of Muggle things, LOL), and the dynamics between them. Al is really such a conceited, arrogant prat... but oh, oh, oh - how my heart broke a little for him at the very end.

Other commenters have said this much more eloquently than I, so I'll just finish with, 'AMAZING.'

[teenage_hustler]

Yay! That was EXACTLY what I was setting out to achieve!

Thank you so much for reading!

[edenskye]

WOW

Amazing job Mystery Author.

I loved everything about this story. Poor Albus. He tries so hard to hide his emotions that the burst out at the most inappropriate time.

I shook my head. “Scorpius, if you were any more gay you’d literally shit rainbows.”

This quote had me ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!

[teenage_hustler]

Hi! Thanks for your comment, and for reading!

Hehe, yes, a few people seem to have enjoyed that line. Comedy writing is probably my favourite thing of all, so I'm really glad you appreciated it!

[wwmrsweasleydo]

I love Albus in this fic. I want one of my own! Great smut and a fantastic emotional development. Loved it!

[teenage_hustler]

Hehe! Okiedokie, one arsehole!Al on the way!

Thanks so much for reading. :)