Prologue (editted)

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Hi, there.

I came from 2xcreative. This was a very good prologue. Your descriptions are very well done, and this prologue sets the beginning nicely, it invites people to find out more of the story and of Nuala.

Keep on writing :)

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Thanks!!! I'm glad the descriptions came out well- I put a lot of effort into those!!! If you liked this, then come back and check my journal every now and again! I'll be posting updates every so often. Thank you for your feed back.
Gwennan, out!