Leave a comment

Comments 5

little_elfie July 1 2011, 19:54:50 UTC
Oh!

The poor thing...he's like a lost little boy trapped in a man's body...you've honestly made me cry with this chapter...

And Esmeralda being so tender and taking care of him - bittersweet and so sad...but there is hope for them both!

Can't wait for part three!

Reply

howlingmojo July 1 2011, 22:10:16 UTC
There. That's it. Without sounding weird or anything, you have just given me the biggest compliment one can give an author.

The ability to bend peoples emotions.

Wow. thank you!

Reply

little_elfie July 2 2011, 21:54:33 UTC
:)

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

howlingmojo July 5 2011, 19:42:26 UTC
Awww, you're too sweet. So, now that they're in bed together, what do you think the next step will be?

Reply

(The comment has been removed)

howlingmojo July 5 2011, 20:29:20 UTC
You're the third one to say that! The Esmeralda being the active part I mean. There's this neat little role/reversal thing going on, with Esme as the Dominant. One that I am very eager to explore.

well, in my head, this is the part that the story kind of hinges on, so we'll be looking at at least one more chapter. It's also an exercise in pacing for me, because I do want them to get hot and heavy and..well, you'll see soon enough.

Thunder and lightning for all!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up