Comments | howlinchickhowl: Oneshot - Spend the night, I'll treat you right

howlinchickhowl

Oneshot - Spend the night, I'll treat you right

Sep 12, 2011 21:30

A little fic I wrote for the cliche!fic challenge at the DPP this weekend.

Title: Spend the night, I'll treat you right
Pairing: Kara/Lee
Rating: R-ish
Warnings: None. Unless you need to be warned about stealth!snuggling and fluff. There's that. Un-beta'd because I was too lazy to make changes anyways!
Word Count:2,792

Summary: When Kara's car breaks ( Read more... )

kara, kara/lee, one-shot, written for..., lee, fanfiction, bsg

Comments 26

kdbleu September 12 2011, 20:57:37 UTC

Awww, cute and sexy. Love a sneaky Kara gettign Lee into bed.

howlinchickhowl September 12 2011, 21:37:09 UTC

Hee, she is sneaky! But Lee is pretty thick, a girl's gotta do whatever it takes :)

STEEEAAAAALLLLLTTTTHHHHH SSSNNNNUGGGGLLLE!! callmeonetrack September 12 2011, 20:59:55 UTC

Aw I love this so much! It's everything a (why is this comment font so damn small? My old-ass eyes can't see what I'm typing!) cliche fic should be!! So adorable and lovely and happy-making. I love how cute and bantery it is, but also the softer moments, like the headlights on her face and him touching her cheek, and Kara saying I LOVE YOU first and it not sounding totally ridiculous. I think you do such a great job of keeping them in character while also indulging the sweet stuff. Yay! And I love that she orchestrated it of course. Kara going after what she wants! \o/

Re: STEEEAAAAALLLLLTTTTHHHHH SSSNNNNUGGGGLLLE!! howlinchickhowl September 12 2011, 21:44:45 UTC

HEE! This cracked me up so much :D

But seriously, I am glad you approve :) I mean, there was stealth!snuggling so I was like, 98% sure you would like it, but it's good to know for sure :P

I think you do such a great job of keeping them in character while also indulging the sweet stuff. Yay! And I love that she orchestrated it of course.

Thank you so much, this is a lovely thing to say, and OF COURSE she orchestrated it :D She thinks outside the box, you know?

embolalia September 12 2011, 21:09:20 UTC

Awwwwww :) This is wonderful! I love all the cuddly tension and awkwardness and SEX THAT ISN'T CHEATING! Yay :)

howlinchickhowl September 12 2011, 21:45:26 UTC

:D Thanks! It was very important that it not be cheating :D I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

scifishipper September 12 2011, 21:57:04 UTC

HA! *GRINNING* What a delightful fic. Kara's wonderful when she plays and Lee's surprise and awkwardness are wonderful, too. Magnificent!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! *squishes them*

howlinchickhowl September 12 2011, 22:18:18 UTC

:D *HUGS* Thank you! I just love it when they tease each other. Awkward Lee is one of my favourites. (I say one of, there are many. THEY'RE ALL MY FAVOURITE!)

damao2010 September 12 2011, 22:00:25 UTC

OMG! Keep bringing out the cliches, bb!

This is so what they needed. Loved the whole thing, of course, but the little revelation at the end was just priceless.
<3

howlinchickhowl September 12 2011, 22:20:19 UTC

I may have to! I love me some cliche!

Hehe, Kara just knows how to get what she wants :D

Thanks for commenting <3