Comments | howaito_hakuryu: Nightmare Warning

howaito_hakuryu

Nightmare Warning

Oct 08, 2010 21:58

Another vignette about Lugh and David, but this is the first time I've 'stolen' Teru's Aedan to include. They're a trifecta, and while this doesn't even really touch it, if you don't agree with m/m/m relationships, then this might not be your cup of tea ( Read more... )

lugh, abjd, david, dolls, aedan

Comments 3

teru_is_true October 9 2010, 03:57:10 UTC

Aww, David. ;^;
*snuggles him*

dark_skada October 9 2010, 06:15:07 UTC

it's harder to write three people into a snuggle scene
It's harder to snuggle with three people than you'd think, too, just a tad bit of personal experience. (Also, a lot harder when two of them are large chested women and the other is a 360lb wall of meat of a man, but that's probably just TMI at this point ( ... )

howaito_hakuryu October 10 2010, 15:23:05 UTC

Despite the dose of TMI, I really really appreciate the feedback! There are a lot of things in there I hadn't really thought about, and I do think I want to use. I've been planning to edit this in the first place to try and make who's doing what a little more clear without sacrificing flow, and you've given me a lot more to think about, too. Thank you!