Song Drabble Meme - Due South F/K

Jun 11, 2010 22:50

Well, I'm dipping my toe into the pond. I thought this would be a good way to do it. Short time span means I can't be held responsible for anything terrible ( Read more... )

fanfic: due south

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j_s_cavalcante June 12 2010, 04:02:01 UTC
These are wonderful! :)

Not legible, mind you--thank heaven for the "view in my style" button (yes, I'm teasing you, but seriously, I can't focus on white type on black)--but absolutely wonderful. Well-written, and they each have a point, and how the heck do you do that in the space of one song?

You are damn good. Hope you will write longer stuff; it would be a treat! (Write the club story, write the club story! :)

P.S. If you want people to see these, post a notice at ds_noticeboard. I don't know why I still have ds_slash on my reading list, as it's a mostly inactive comm, I think. Noticeboard is the place to be, well, noticed. :)

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how_obscure June 12 2010, 04:28:27 UTC
Heh, I'm so relieved to hear someone likes them. I'm glad you think each has a point. I tried to make sure I got to as good of a stopping point as possible before the song ended.

I'll try to write more, but length is not my forte.

Sorry about the white on black! And thanks so much for pointing out that I wasn't posting in the best place. I'll go remedy that right now. :)

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china_shop June 12 2010, 05:04:05 UTC
Oh cool! I particularly like your Fraser voice in "He's A Pirate" -- heeee! :-)

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how_obscure June 12 2010, 05:06:15 UTC
Thank you. "He's A Pirate" was one of my favorites. :)

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ophelia_winters June 12 2010, 14:06:51 UTC
I really liked these! And I didn't feel lost at all considering how long it's been since I watched the show! I loved the first one, so sad. Oh and "Oceano" was lovely!
I think you did a brilliant job with these, that I really can't wait for you to give Rayne a go next!

oh and also, your icon =LOOOVE!! Very pretty DS icon. :)

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how_obscure June 12 2010, 17:53:07 UTC
I'm glad you weren't lost! But you're making me blush--I hope my Rayne lives up to your expectations.

It is pretty. view_paradise made it.

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thursdaynext_27 June 12 2010, 15:46:44 UTC
My particular favorites:

"Liar," interesting insight into Fraser and his Mountie persona. He is the master of manipulation through guilt.

You also created a nice contrast with Oceano (...adventure of starting a life with Benton) and Numb (He just couldn’t be who Fraser wanted him to be.).

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how_obscure June 12 2010, 17:46:12 UTC
The concept of Fraser lying through body language, especially with regards to women isn't an idea I for which I can truly take credit. It's an idea I encountered in a fic some time ago. I'm afraid I couldn't manage 100% creativity on that one in such a short timespan.

Thank you. It was interesting that those two ended up right next to each other.

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akamine_chan June 14 2010, 18:44:11 UTC
I think you're thinking of The Lies We Tell by GD, which is a perennial favorite of mine...*g*

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how_obscure June 14 2010, 19:07:55 UTC
Nope, I'd never read that one, but it is pretty good.

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mamaffy June 14 2010, 10:49:13 UTC
Lovely, very thought-provoking. Amazing how low-key it is, makes it even more sad to me.

Ray tried to make a joke. It was lame, but Fraser laughed anyway, one last time.
He tried to be nonjudgmental, sure, but he disapproved of a large number of people’s actions.

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how_obscure June 14 2010, 14:40:29 UTC
Thank you.

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