Well, I'm dipping my toe into the pond. I thought this would be a good way to do it. Short time span means I can't be held responsible for anything terrible
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Not legible, mind you--thank heaven for the "view in my style" button (yes, I'm teasing you, but seriously, I can't focus on white type on black)--but absolutely wonderful. Well-written, and they each have a point, and how the heck do you do that in the space of one song?
You are damn good. Hope you will write longer stuff; it would be a treat! (Write the club story, write the club story! :)
P.S. If you want people to see these, post a notice at ds_noticeboard. I don't know why I still have ds_slash on my reading list, as it's a mostly inactive comm, I think. Noticeboard is the place to be, well, noticed. :)
Heh, I'm so relieved to hear someone likes them. I'm glad you think each has a point. I tried to make sure I got to as good of a stopping point as possible before the song ended.
I'll try to write more, but length is not my forte.
Sorry about the white on black! And thanks so much for pointing out that I wasn't posting in the best place. I'll go remedy that right now. :)
I really liked these! And I didn't feel lost at all considering how long it's been since I watched the show! I loved the first one, so sad. Oh and "Oceano" was lovely! I think you did a brilliant job with these, that I really can't wait for you to give Rayne a go next!
oh and also, your icon =LOOOVE!! Very pretty DS icon. :)
"Liar," interesting insight into Fraser and his Mountie persona. He is the master of manipulation through guilt.
You also created a nice contrast with Oceano (...adventure of starting a life with Benton) and Numb (He just couldn’t be who Fraser wanted him to be.).
The concept of Fraser lying through body language, especially with regards to women isn't an idea I for which I can truly take credit. It's an idea I encountered in a fic some time ago. I'm afraid I couldn't manage 100% creativity on that one in such a short timespan.
Thank you. It was interesting that those two ended up right next to each other.
Lovely, very thought-provoking. Amazing how low-key it is, makes it even more sad to me.
Ray tried to make a joke. It was lame, but Fraser laughed anyway, one last time. He tried to be nonjudgmental, sure, but he disapproved of a large number of people’s actions.
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Not legible, mind you--thank heaven for the "view in my style" button (yes, I'm teasing you, but seriously, I can't focus on white type on black)--but absolutely wonderful. Well-written, and they each have a point, and how the heck do you do that in the space of one song?
You are damn good. Hope you will write longer stuff; it would be a treat! (Write the club story, write the club story! :)
P.S. If you want people to see these, post a notice at ds_noticeboard. I don't know why I still have ds_slash on my reading list, as it's a mostly inactive comm, I think. Noticeboard is the place to be, well, noticed. :)
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I'll try to write more, but length is not my forte.
Sorry about the white on black! And thanks so much for pointing out that I wasn't posting in the best place. I'll go remedy that right now. :)
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I think you did a brilliant job with these, that I really can't wait for you to give Rayne a go next!
oh and also, your icon =LOOOVE!! Very pretty DS icon. :)
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It is pretty. view_paradise made it.
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"Liar," interesting insight into Fraser and his Mountie persona. He is the master of manipulation through guilt.
You also created a nice contrast with Oceano (...adventure of starting a life with Benton) and Numb (He just couldn’t be who Fraser wanted him to be.).
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Thank you. It was interesting that those two ended up right next to each other.
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Ray tried to make a joke. It was lame, but Fraser laughed anyway, one last time.
He tried to be nonjudgmental, sure, but he disapproved of a large number of people’s actions.
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