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starxd_sparrow February 6 2007, 07:49:15 UTC
Oh my! I just loved this, doll! Sweet, cute, steamy, and just the right amount of jackass / snark.

Of course, my favorite thing about this (besides the pairing... more MacDick! Yay!) is the attention to detail! Fiona Apple(which I totally have to listen to...now!), zinnias, snickerdoodle-scented shampoo (does such a thing really exist?! I want some!)... I'm such a sucker for the details! Brava!

Oh, and this: “Fo guck urgself,” Dick garbled? Flipping genius!

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houses7177 February 6 2007, 13:59:00 UTC
Snickerdoodle shampoo does, in fact, exist. It's actually Sugar Cookie by Philosophy, but it smells like Snickerdoodles to me! Yum.

I'm big on detail in all my fics and I think it goes a long way towards establishing the reality of a fic.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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starxd_sparrow February 6 2007, 18:03:39 UTC
Thanks for the link! Perhaps I'll get some, since it does sound delightful *g*

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houses_on_fire February 6 2007, 18:07:21 UTC
All of Philosophy's stuff is delicious. I had a perfume once that smelled like vanilla cookies and my husband made me stop wearing it--though he bought it for me--for the exact reason Dick likes the shampoo above: I wore it, he ate cookies. Mmmm, cookies.

Obviously, I'm starving.

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susysvensson February 6 2007, 13:29:13 UTC
This...is...gorgeous!
Can't wait for the next fic!

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houses7177 February 6 2007, 13:53:03 UTC
The next fic is in progress, and so far, just as entertaining as this one! Thanks!

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twofourteen February 6 2007, 14:40:25 UTC
Hah. I love it. It seems even alittle plausible. I want to be naked in a shower with Dick. Hah.

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houses_on_fire February 6 2007, 15:31:40 UTC
I tend not to write things I can't believe in even a little bit. They're such an ingrituing possiblity as a pairing, but it has to be done very carefully or it won't work. I'm glad you like it!

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_cinjudes_ February 6 2007, 15:09:57 UTC
As you know the thought of this pairing always did kinda get my motor running, so I was uber excited when you told me you were working on it. Now, consider my brain signifigantly eaten as well.

Completely AWESOME ficlet. And I am just so overjoyed you cannot image. As usual you character voice is so nicely pitched and your tone and story flow are a delight. And your Dick? LOVE HIM! Mac? Made of awesome!

Now I'm jonesing for more and am rejoicing that someone, somewhere is doing this ship right. *smooches*

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houses_on_fire February 6 2007, 15:33:04 UTC
Brain-eatage is an occupational hazard, I'd say.

I'm glad you like it! I won't read other fics that feature the same pairings I write when I'm writing them, so I'm not sure what else is out there. I can see this going horribly wrong in execution, though.

French Toast is about three pages done!

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leobrat February 6 2007, 15:35:45 UTC
Oh this was awesome, and very sexy. I love the image of Dick getting Mac naked and just holding her.

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houses_on_fire February 6 2007, 15:43:19 UTC
Dick is more complicated than he thinks he is, and I think he needed to be held just as much. They look like they're going to be a fun pairing to play with.

Thanks!

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