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Fic: Not Ours to Command

Oct 02, 2009 08:59

Title: Not Ours to Command
Authors: aella_irene and bedlamsbard
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Incest, underage sex (14/15)
Summary: Richard hasn't seen Jack since breakfast, or Helen either. Jack/Richard/Helen, first-time.
Disclaimer: The Chronicles of Narnia and its characters, situations, settings, etc., belong to C.S. Lewis. Some characters, settings, situations, etc., ( Read more... )

fic, char: richard, char: jack, year: 30, char: helen

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snacky October 2 2009, 19:45:10 UTC

Aw, yay, Junior Pevensies! I have missed them! Especially these three. I liked this scene a lot - you got both the intensity and the sibling connection in there.

his father always instructed him to play fair when he could.

That line cracked me up. And I liked the ending where they were discussing who knows and who doesn't and the nice banter going on.

bedlamsbard October 2 2009, 20:10:57 UTC

We wrote this in, uh, August. And then got distracted...

Peter has tried to teach his children values! Important lessons! That sort of thing!

aella_irene October 2 2009, 20:24:46 UTC

Correct behaviour at orgies! (Not that he is admitting anything about that time with Osumare, and Fiorenza, and Susan...)

snacky October 2 2009, 20:25:58 UTC

No, you got distracted? ;) Still! Nice to read a bit of them again.

Peter has tried to teach his children values! Important lessons! That sort of thing!

"Let others have a chance to orgasm."

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