003. Ends

[synecdoche]

Title: Untitled (I am a chronic failure at titles)
Characters/Pairing: House/Stacy. Cuddy makes some appearances.
Prompt: 003. Ends
Word Count: 474
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Spoilers for "Three Stories."
Author's Notes: I have a thing for writing in second person. There's a kind of immediacy that you can't get any other way. I also find myself liking

Comments

[ladybugkoozl]

I liked this. I enjoyed seeing Stacy's point of view, and this episode (Three Stories) is really what did her character justice. You make her very human and flesh her out nicely. I could tell she loved him which is what really makes this fic work well.

I see why you put in the parentheses, but truthfully I think you could take most of them out. As I was reading, they tended to be a distraction. This fic is from Stacy's POV, so you are allowed to have a lot of that internal dialogue just stand by itself rather than be inside "()". :-)

[synecdoche]

I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

And thank you so much for the advice on the parentheses -- looking back on it, most of them were just sort of there for emphasis over actual paranthetical commentary. (Oh man, those were big words...) I'll be editing a lot of them out. :)