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[kyohaku]

Title: Devotion
Characters/Pairing: Gregory House/James Wilson
Prompt: 008. Fear
Word Count: 640
Rating: PG
Spoilers: None
Author's Notes: Um, my first House fanfic that’s complete. Don’t kill me okay? And it’s slash. So, if you don’t like men being “friendly” with other men, don’t read it.

Comments

[celticfaerie2]

It is good. Heartbreaking. So very sad, but a lot of the good fics are.

[kyohaku]

I was going to write more, but I figured, leave it as is. A little wondering and imagination on the part of the reader makes it more enjoyable. At least I think so. ^_^ Glad you enjoyed it!

[ladybugkoozl]

That is so sad! I'm not a H/W slash person, but this was written with tenderness, which was nice.

And don't bash your own fic, dear. You did a nice job on this one. Just know that each one you write gets better and writing is definitely a learning experience!

[kyohaku]

Aw, thank you for the words of kindness! I have a tendancy to bash myself constantly. But it's good to know people enjoy my work. The inspiration from this actually came from something I personally went through. Maybe that's what helped with the emotion and such. Anyway thanks for the comment!

[divisionvixen]

Hey, I'm right there in that boat with you. My friends are constantly annoyed by me, because I will spend forever poring over a fic and working and working, and then proclaim it total crap and hate it and burn it. But you do get better with time, and even though I'm not a slash person, dude, you don't suck.

[kyohaku]

Hehe thank you. ^_^;

[kyohaku]

Thank you for the comment! It's a real boost to an author to see positive remarks!