Fiction: KISS

[genagirl]

Title: Kiss
Author: gena
Email: sentinelgirl@yahoo.com
Rating: PG13 (slash)
pairing: H/W
Disclaimer: Not mine, but I wish they were.
Summary: There are different kinds of kisses.

Comments

[lolabobs]

this was lovely!
I agree with the commenters that the last paragraph ties everything together, and the leastline of the longing section is so evocative, But my favourite is the sloppy laughter kiss because it's so real...

[lolabobs]

last line, not leastline?!

[genagirl]

Sloppy boy kisses! Isn't that a great image?????

[alemyrddin]

this was so sweet.
I love the first one, and the last line, in particular.
:)

[mireya_11]

ooooooh x33333

so sweet :')
love the last line
and the part of the telephone kiss x3