It all started with Callie's Spiderman underwear.
Erica blamed Spidey.
Callie, wearing only a clingy tank top and Spiderman underwear, was brushing her teeth in Erica's immaculate bathroom. That night, Callie opted for the thick, cotton briefs with the red, elastic waistband and vibrant cartoons championing an iconic superhero with the unfortunate
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I love that Erica has a self-admitted staring problem where Callie's concerned.
I enjoyed it very much :))
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Thanks so much for reading and letting me know what you thought! Oh, and I'm looking forward to more fic from you??? I always enjoy your work!
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There will be more stuff soon :))
(Hopefully there'll be more stuff from you as well!)
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And yeah, I'm working on some other ideas too!
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'They had even passed the toothbrush test with flying rainbow colors, Callie reasoned.' Soooo funny, a wonderful description
'Callie subscribed to the commandment, If you liked it then you should have put a ring on it, the gospel according to Beyonce.' I seriously nearly lol'd my pants off.
'Refusing sex with Callie was comparable to giving away a unicorn, it just wasn't done.' Again, a wonderful display of creativity that doesn't detract from the plot.
Very enjoyable!
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And thanks for liking the Beyonce line! I love that song and it just couldn't NOT use that lyric.
I almost deleted that unicorn line. Seriously, I deleted it and put it back a bunch of times, I didn't know if it made sense. Now I'm glad I kept it in!
Thank you so, so much for reading and letting me know what stuck out to you--it means so much to me!!
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Really. I like your diction, every little memory of Callie and Erica together that shows they are utterly happy, and the not-so-silent promise that they'll be so; the promise of forever. Every single part of this was absolutely perfect. I think I needed happy Callica. And I think 'Ericascent' is my favorite word now. (:
*sigh* How I missed your writing. I may have to re-think my Top 5: Callica, you know...
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You may have to re-think your Top 5:Callica?? Yay!! That's the best compliment ever!!
Thanks so much for reading and giving such sweet feedback--it means so much, you have no idea!
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I have the underwear too ;)
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Spiderman is awesome, the awesome-est!(not a word, but whatever.)
Thanks for reading!!!
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I was sat shouting "But, Brooke.. That's how I look at YOU!"
I genuinely believe if she met me, she'd realise we're meant to be ;)
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That's exactly how I would have stared at Brooke too!
LOL...you and Brooke are meant to be? That's adorable...and my thoughts exactly...I'll arm wrestle you for her? :)
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